(Closed) Opinions on RSVP- suggestions? Changes?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Newbee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I think it’s beautiful and simplistic (which i love) — although check the spacing between May and 12. It looks like it might be double spaced.

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

I’m not the best at this, but here goes:

Is there an extra space between May and 12?

Can you align the “space” for regretfully declines to the right so it is directly under the line closest to the accepting with pleasure?

The note at the bottom is hard to read – not sure how it looks printed, but maybe you can bump it up a little in size.

I like the overall look of them 🙂
 

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

Which Wedding Chicks design is this? I like the fonts.

Ditto PP that the tiny bottom line might be hard to read – it could be the curly font. Can you change that line to be the same font as the date?

Post # 6
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I like it a lot 🙂 I, too, noticed the spacing in the date and I wondered about making that bottom line slightly larger… Overall, great job!

Post # 7
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2011

Very cute design.  I would just change your verb tense so they match each other.  So either

Accepts / Declines or Accepting / Declining

Post # 10
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

@Meowkers:  Oh good call on the verb tense! I didn’t notice it, but it sounds so much better now 🙂

Post # 11
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 2013

I’ve never been a fan of the “Accepts with pleasure/regretfully declines”. While most people are happy to attend a wedding or are regretful that they have to decline, it seems like you’re telling guests how they’re supposed to feel about attending the wedding. I know I’m going to be invited to a wedding this summer that I really don’t want to attend and will not be regretfully declining. I’ll just be declining.

Post # 12
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

That looks great! Whould you mind sending me the template for this?

Post # 13
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

It’s minor, but perhaps instead of  “give” dietary restrictions on the back, use “specify” any dietary restrictions, “if any”.

Post # 15
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: April 2012

looks nice.  i like the fonts.

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