(Closed) Our Colorful, DIY Invitation Suite… thoughts?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

They’re really cute, but In My Humble Opinion they have a little too much going on. If they were mine, I’d cut back on the details a bit.

Post # 4
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: January 2012

@bebero:  I agree. It`s a little ovewhelming on the eye. I think simply removing the blue triangles would declutter it a lot.

Post # 5
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013 - Rocky Mountains USA

Aw I like them!  They’re definitely visually busy, but that’s kind of what you’re going for right?  Colorful, fun, playful?  I think you accomplished it well.  Taking out the “taking place” on the first sheet would help declutter a little bit, since I don’t think that phrase is necessary.

Post # 6
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: March 2013

I dig it. Cute.

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

@MrsRugbee:  totally! I was thinking of the little triangles and the “taking place”

Post # 9
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

They are cute, but I agree that they are very busy.  It would be nice to see them with two, maybe three fonts?  and with out the banner thing around the date.  It’s not something people will likely miss, so I don’t think it needs so much embelisment.  I think the “taking place” and “at the” are also a bit redundant and by eliminating them you could make the main invite less busy.  Also maybe just put the food, fun & dancing on a seperate card?.  Taking that out would also help to simlify your invite a little.  The cards look great though.  I would suggest not printing the smaller cursive print in yellow.  It can be hard to read, especially if it gets printed too lightly.  

Post # 11
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

They’re so fun! Not too busy and I like the bunting detail. I would just take out the “taking place” as PPs have mentioned already.

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2013 - Rosehill Community Center

I love the color, and they are SO FUN!  Especially the RSVPs are cute!  And I love the Wisconson shape!  Ahhh, I wish my Fiance would let me go the more informal and bright and fun route with our paper stuff!

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