(Closed) Our Save-the-Date Proofs! What do you think?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: February 2014

It looks beautiful!! Such a lovely poem. πŸ™‚

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: February 2014

@Cassiopeia:  I don’t think it’s awkward at all!! When I first read it, I simply thought it was a wonderful sentiment. I feel the same way about my relationship with my FH. πŸ™‚

Post # 6
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

I thought that line was a little awkward when I first read it. But, they so cute besides that. Love them!

Post # 7
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2013 - The Liberty House

I didn’t think the line was awkward at all, but I also assumed it was a quote. I like it a lot!! Please don’t try to change it!

Post # 8
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Helper bee

@Cassiopeia:  It’s very sweet! Maybe put quotation marks around the verse? And add ‘dots’ to show that it’s part of a poem?

eg:

“…things really work out sometimes as they should”

Post # 9
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: October 2013

@Cassiopeia:  not gonna lie, I re-worded it in my head to “sometimes, things really work out as they should”…but that was before I read that it’s from a poem. So to me it comes off as kind of awkward but if it has meaning to you, then write it the way you want.

Post # 10
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

@Quinlan:  I agree.  At first I thought it was a typo of some sort…

Post # 11
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013 - Rocky Mountains USA

@Cassiopeia:  I love it! But maybe do the quotation marks if you’re concerned?

Post # 12
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013

@Quinlan:  Yes, this. It is an awkward sentence if you don’t know where it’s from. It took me several tries for my brain to wrap around what it actually said.

Other than that, it’s very cute!

Post # 13
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

@Cassiopeia:  Yes, I thought it was awkward when I first read it – I think if you go with Quinlan‘s advice and do the “…things really work out sometimes as they should” – that would be MUCH better! πŸ™‚  Or maybe print the poem on the back??

Post # 15
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

@Cassiopeia:  Cute and unique save-the-date and it’s nice that that is comes from a poem. Was the poem included in the save-the-date? πŸ™‚ 

Post # 16
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013

I agree with adding quote marks. When I read it the first time it was awkward but in that way that makes me know it must be from a song or poem or just an old piece of writing. I like it but quote marks will make it better. Also, will you have your last names written somewhere? Just to be sure people know who you are?

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