(Closed) our welcome letter…Tips Please

posted 6 years ago in Destination Weddings
Post # 3
46407 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I think you did a great job!

Post # 4
1239 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: March 2013

@Pappy8:  hi, its very good.  A couple of comments, in the last paragraph I think the 1st sentence needs to be rewritten slightly by adding the underlined words. Also change your to you in the last sentence.

We hope you enjoy the goodies in this bag and that they will make your stay just a little more fun and comfortable.  They are just a small token of our appreciation for you being with us this week.

Post # 5
74 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

I know it’s a little late.. but good job!

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