(Closed) Please check for grammar and readibility issues

posted 4 years ago in Etiquette
Post # 5
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227 posts
Helper bee

I would personally put “half past ten”, but it’s not really a formality, just a personal preference.

Post # 6
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1876 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

@Notcool:  I think the wording is nice and it sounds like a lovely idea. if you want to do something handwritten though, would you consider handing writing them in a formal invitation style (vs letter style)? Mostly because this will make it clear that this is the wedding invitation, and it will still be that homemade quality you are looking for.

Post # 7
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3730 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

Is Plant Food the name of the restaurant? Or is it Plant Food Restaurant? Or is it a restaurant named Plant that serves food?

I would also change the year to read: two thousand fourteen

Here are some examples of wording.

 

Post # 10
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10510 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: January 2011

@Notcool:  January seventh

I don’t like all of the dashes, and would probably do separate lines in their place to make it appear more like a wedding invitation, but that’s all personal preference.

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