(Closed) Please comment on my wedding invites! :)

posted 9 years ago in DIY
Post # 17
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2017 - Vegas Wedings

I like what kfiorita said. The current working doesnt make sense to me.

“Ms. So-and-So, For your love and friendship, And we would love if you could be there”

Post # 18
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509 posts
Busy bee

Love them, and the movie quotes (Lord of the Rings and Pirates of the Caribbean! I’m shocked only one person figured that out!)

I don’t think “fussy eater” is a problem. Let’s face it, some people are fussy eaters, and if that offends them, too bad! They ARE fussy eaters! That’s just my opinion, though! (And I’m a BIG foodie!!)

Post # 19
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Busy bee

Although on the actual invite, I do think that:

 

INSERT NAME HERE

For your love and friendship,

we would love for you to join us

 

would sound better, look better, and be easier to read.

Post # 20
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

The wording is awkward at best. I’m sorry, but putting ANYTHING about gifts on an invite is a huge no no. Please do not do that, people know to brings gifts to weddings and if someone isn’t going to bring one your invite isn’t going to change their mind. 

I’d re-work the wording majorly. 

 

Post # 21
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

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@mixtapehearts:  I agree.  It’d be better to just put “For more information, please visit our website”. 

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