(Closed) Please critique my ceremony wording!

posted 5 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 4
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Newbee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I like the way you’ve worded things. Kudos to you for being so thorough and really thinking through every part of the ceremony. I love the little ‘speech’ you’ve created for the wine box ceremony. Good job!

Post # 5
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

Absolutely beautiful. It’s the perfect balance between you both. Thank you for sharing 🙂

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: April 2016

I like it! The only part that looks a little weird to me is that in both 1 and 2, you use the words “celebrate the love they have”. I would switch one of those around a bit, just to give it a bit more… diversity (i don know how to explain it haha)

Otherwise it sounds really good to me!

Post # 8
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

@cirk:  i agree! it sounds a little deja-vou-ish. other than that, super cute

Post # 9
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

i love the wine box ceremony 

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