(Closed) Please critique my invitations!

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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441 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

They look great!  Why not make the font smaller on the accommodations card?  Also you could have it non capitalized font which might make it look a littler nicer/ more fitting.

Post # 4
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1966 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

They look great good job!! As for the accommodations I think you can get rid of “ask for the xyz wedding for adiscount rate”. You are already telling them you have a block of rooms in the first line. 

Post # 5
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951 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

Looks nice, but a few notes:

Accommodation card – accommodation is spelt wrong the second time it’s used.

Reply card – the graphic seems to repeat on the right and it doesn’t look like it should. It looks like there is a smudge to the left of before. The whole top section ‘favor of a reply..’ looks like it is too far right and should be centre aligned.

The all caps on the enclosure cards I am not sold on, but that is a personal stylistic preference for me.

Otherwise, looks nice!

Post # 6
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

I would suggest not using all caps and maybe try some different font. It’s very pretty but you can have more than one font on it and it will look very elegant. It will also help the accomodations page be not so heavy.

Two other things.

One, I would make the text on the bottom of your invite a little wider, if that makes sense. In photoshop you can spread your text out more.

Two, the line on your RSVP should be two lines, not one. It’s too tight.

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Post # 9
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I like it but agree with the changes pp have said

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