(Closed) Please critique my MoH speech!

posted 5 years ago in Bridesmaids
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I think it’s great!  Not too long, not too much about you.  Very nice speech!

Post # 4
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: November 2013

@beautythatmoves:  Aww it’s beautiful. It reminds me of my relationship with my bestie and literally brought tears to my eyes. So sweet. 🙂

Post # 5
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

Perfection 

Post # 6
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: December 2010

It is beautiful and sweet.

 

I actually got a bit teary!

 

 

 

Post # 7
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: November 2013

Lovely and sweet :*)

This is sure to bring a few tears!

Post # 8
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Buzzing bee

It’s really lovely!

Post # 9
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

That is a really sweet and well-written speech! 🙂  The only thing I would say to add is to maybe have a few nice words about the groom and them as a couple (e.g. an example of how he’s perfect for her, what makes them a cute couple, etc.).

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

Aw wow that’s perfect! Great job!! You should teach a master class on wedding speeches and save thousands of guests from terrible prose 🙂

Post # 12
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2014

Perfect! So cute. I think everyone will love it!

Post # 13
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

It’s really sweet. I kind of found the thanks at the beginning a little odd – just doesn’t seem like your place to be thanking people and I’ve never heard MOH/Best Men thanking anyone.  Also, I think you could add a little more in about the groom to tie it all together, since this day is about them, not just your relationship to the bride.  Just my 2 cents, though.  You definitely have a perfect amount of sentiment and comedy.

Post # 14
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2014

I think it’s lovely. The bride will love it!

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