(Closed) Please critique my programs? :)

posted 8 years ago in DIY
  • poll: Does my program design look okay?

    Yes, it looks great just like that!

    Yes, but it needs just a few changes, which I will specify in a comment...

    Nope, get someone else to design it for you.

    Other.

  • Post # 3
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    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: May 2009

    I would recommend that you use a different script font, one that is more formal and elegant, to contrast better with your wonderful, small-cap font that you chose for your main text.

    In my opinion, the script that you’ve chosen is not quite elegant enough. To give you an idea of the look I would suggest, I will post the sample invitation (not our actual names or locations) showing the fonts that my DH and I used for our invitation suite and our wedding programs.


    I know that it’s not easy to see the words printed in the script font, because they’re hiding behind the ribbon. However, do you see what I mean?  This font is a more regal-looking script, and the one you’ve selected looks a bit more like someone’s handwriting.  However, if that’s the look that you prefer, then please do not allow my opinion to dissuade you.

    Post # 4
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: May 2014

    I like it overall, but do agree that you should change the font.

    Post # 5
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    Blushing bee
    • Wedding: November 2013

    I think they’re lovely just as they are. But I like a simple, clean look. I especially like the mix of fonts. Don’t change a thing!

    Post # 6
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    Busy bee
    • Wedding: September 2013

    Just the font.

    Post # 8
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    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: May 2009

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    @anonymouspioneer:  Well, if you love that script, then I would suggest you try making it one to two points larger (two may take up too much space), to help open it up a bit so that it has a stronger standing against the openness of the small caps.  Try that, and it may go a long way toward addressing what I am perceiving as an inequity between these fonts.

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