(Closed) Please critique my save the dates!

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: December 2010

I think they’re super-cute, but the fact that your names are in lowercase while everything else is in caps kind of throws me off.

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

i like it!

Post # 5
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Newbee

I think they are cute!  I actually would switch the big picture on the front w/ the B&W one on the back (I just love that picture!)  And w/ that one in B&W you would be distinguishing the big one on the front… but just me =)  I would possibly make the “save the date” a bit larger, so that it comes up to the top of the 3rd picture on the right, and maybe space out the writing more so that it comes all the way to the bottom.  But I tend to be a symmetrical person!

But just like that is adorable, too!

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

I think it’s a very nice Save the Date as is. I actually like the lower case names so your names stand out. On the back, I don’t think it’s necessary to repeat: Your names, date, location since it’s on the front. With the STD’s I think LESS is MORE. Just my humble opinion. Great pics

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

@blingybride: Agree. They are adorable but maybe less is more??? Just a thought, even if you went with these they are super cute! 

Post # 8
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2011

Awesome! I’m a fan !

I love the picture tones and the post-card esque look 🙂

Hopefully It prints as gorgeous as it looks right now !

Post # 9
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2012 - Historic Cedarwood

I think they are great! I like the big picture on the front because it includes your faces 🙂 I agree that the picture on the back is adorable, but I think that having it by itself makes it stand out too, so you got that covered. Great job!

Post # 11
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Newbee

I think it’s ok that the names are lowercase, but they should be so much bigger. It’s about yall. can we flip your names with “Save the Date”? In fact Save the Date doesn’t technically need to be there. People are going to know immediately that this is a save the date.

Post # 12
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

you can remove the period after “formal invitation to follow”

 

Post # 13
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

Wow I love the cover, beautiful!

Post # 14
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

I think the way you’ve broken up the wording on the back is funny.

 

Try this:

Jamie

&

Aren

are getting married!

June 30, 2012

Lansing, Michigan

We hope you’ll come celebrate with us!

Post # 15
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

Very nice! I think you did a great job. I wouldn’t change a thing.

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