(Closed) PLEASE HELP critique my invitation wording/format

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2012

I’m not an expert on this, but I believe it’s “two thousand twelve” without the “and”, and 4:00 would be considered afternoon.

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2012

+1 to what Westwood said

 

Post # 5
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

I would not list the names of your parents.  I think saying, “Together with their parents” is enough.  Also, I would not say “at four o’clock” and “at location”; I would write, “Four o’clock in the afternoon”  “location”.

 

 

Post # 6
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

Everything looked fine with the exception of what Westwood said. Just fix those two things and you should be good to go!

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

@peachacid: That would depend on how formal their function is though. If the parents are paying (or helping a substantial amount) I think it’s nice to have their names on the invite. 

Post # 8
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

@peachacid:

I think it’s fine to list your parents names like that.  It was important to my parents to have their names listed on the invitation.  We wrote ours out the same way.

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