(Closed) Please help me proof these

posted 4 years ago in Paper
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  • Post # 4
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    Honey bee
    • Wedding: October 2013

    Are you getting married in a church or other venue?

    ETA: I’m an idiot. I can clearly see where it says church. Since that’s the case, they look great!

    Post # 5
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    710 posts
    Busy bee

    It catches my eye that the restaurant name is not alligned with the rest of the text and is so close to the edge of the paper.

    And for the block of text at the bottom of that card, I’d suggest simply:

    PLEASE RSVP THROUGH OUR WEDDING WEBSITE BY [DATE]
    WEDDINGWEBSITE.COM
    PASSWORD: [email protected]#$%

    (Seems redundant to say that there’s other information available there)

    Post # 7
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    Busy bee
    • Wedding: July 2013

    @Autumnsnow:  Two o’clock in the afternoon is a bit wordy and redundant. Skip “in the afternoon” because no one is going to think that your wedding is at 2 am.

    Post # 8
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    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: September 2014

    i think it looks great (:

    @NLbride:  i think according to etiquette, the ‘in the afternoon’ has to be there if it’s a formal invitation. yes, it’s common sense. but if it’s a formal invitation, it should be there. just saying, even though i fully agree with you that nobody would assume that it was 2am.

    Post # 9
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    710 posts
    Busy bee

    @Autumnsnow:  I think so. There’s an expectation that those details be on the website, and since you’re directing everyone to the site anyhow… it would be hard to miss the extra info. It would keep with your minimalist look to leave that line out, in my opinion!

    Post # 10
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: June 2014

    @shaka:  Agreed.

    I personally like “honour” instead of “honor” in formal invitations. The old world spelling makes the formality more conspicious (IMO). But I realize that is a personal preference. And it may be due to the fact I’m marrying a Canadian.

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