(Closed) Please help me with my invitation wording!!

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Member
911 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2013 - The Down Town Club, Philadelphia

Hmmm. I think the way it’s worded now makes it seem as though your guests have shared in the lives, etc… of your parents, not you. I would leave it off.

The RSVP card wording is super cute! I might change see you in Mexico to “Viva la Mexico!”, but I’m a wierdo. Laughing

Post # 4
Hostess
3369 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: May 2013

I think along with the parents names, it seems a little bit crowded. Have you thought about adding some cute beachy wording? 

 

You could do something like this, that way your parents names are still there, but you get some cute destination wording as well

 

 

 

Janelle Brooke Alan 
and 
Ronald Steven Knight 
are joining hearts and 
getting married on the tranquil shores of Cancun 
November 14th of 20148 
Please join them for a 
wedding celebration 
November 29th of 2018 
at 6:00 p.m. 
Wander Creek Spa 
Rochester, New York 

 

Hosted by the bride’s parents, 
Jack and Phyllis Alan 
& by the groom’s parents, 
Rick and Joan Knight 

 


 

You could also do something like this 

 

Love washes in like the tide 
soothing the parched sand

 

 BRIDE AND GROOM’S PARENTS Invite you to share 

 

as their children

 


Sue Martin 
and 
John Batler 

 

 are united in marriage 
on Saturday, the seventh of May 
two thousand eighteen 
at five o’clock in the evening 
Garden City Beach

 


Here’s also a bunch more examples that may help you out. 

http://www.invitationconsultants.com/samplewording.aspx?p_subcategory=204

 

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