Post # 1
Please let me know if this sounds ok. Should I change anything?
Someone special, someonoe dear
Someone new, will soon be here
Join us in showering Mom’s name
and her son Bryce Allen
with a baby shower
Sunday, July 14th
at 1:00 P.M.
Mom’s name is registered at Walmart and Target
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Post # 4
That is SO CUTE! Love it!
Post # 5
I would delete and her son Bryce Allen if the shower is being held before the baby is born.
Post # 6
@MmeSilverBullet: I don’t love the part that says “Join us in showering ____ with a baby shower”. The showering with a shower part is just throwing me off a little!
Post # 7
I would make just a few, minor tweaks:
* Put an exclamation point after “here”
* Put “son” and “Bryce Allen” on separate lines
* The date should be July 14 instead of July 14th
* The time should read “1 p.m.” instead of “1:00 P.M.”
Post # 8
Thanks for the help ladies! 🙂