- 6 years ago
- Wedding: August 2012
I am trying to come up with the wording for my favor tags and could really use an outside perspective. Background info on my favors: My Fiance and I spend most of our relationship living in Oregon and got engaged out there. We recently moved back to my hometown in Cleveland and bought a house here. As favors we are giving koozies with Cleveland love on them (Hard to explain but I didn’t want to give a favor with our names on it and these turned out really cute) and I am putting salt water taffies that I ordered from Oregon inside the koozie. I want to add a little tag on the favors to explain the taffy came from Oregon. What I have so far is this:
“Thank you so much for joining us today. Please enjoy a taste of our old life in Oreogn and a toast to our new married life in Cleveland”
Is there any way to make that sound better? Does that sound ok as is? I know this post is long and in the grand scheme of things not very important…but I just can’t move on until I get this right!