(Closed) please proof read

posted 5 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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1446 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

@angb1230:  I don’t see any obvious typos, hopefully other Bees will double-check too. Maybe don’t capitalize the “And” in between your two names, but that could just be a style preference.

Post # 4
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11239 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013

Oh my god, can I come to your wedding? I promise to come in garb.

I agree about not capitalizing “and,” and I don’t think you need to capitalize “at” either, since it’s part of another sentence. 

Post # 5
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3627 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

I agree with PP but to keep with the theme, can we switch out “Cake and punch” for something medieval-y sounding?

Post # 6
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7908 posts
Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

marriage of Lady to Sir, not and. “And” on an invitation means you are already married. Also, don’t capitalize the prepositions and conjunctions. I’d also change “will follow” to “to follow” and remove the “is” in the last line as these are not full sentences and if you insist on full sentences, then they need periods at the end.

Post # 7
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

Do you think your guests will know that high noon is 1, not 12?

It would be cool if this were a scroll…sigh.  I love that you’re doing this so thoroughly!!

Post # 11
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2494 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

@peachacid:  I learned something new cause I totally assumed it was a fancy/medieval way to say 12 o’clock.

Post # 12
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9918 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

@takemyhand:  Well what is it?  My google is broken.

 

ETA: I thought you were talking about morbecque nevermind.  Can someone google that for me? lol

Post # 13
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

@takemyhand:  High noon is when the sun is literally at its highest, which is not really 12 o’clock, especially because of daylight savings, but even still. “High noon” is a relative time and we use a fixed, non-relative method of keeping time (with a clock, not a sundial), so high noon is actually at a different time day by day.

Post # 14
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9918 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

@mrsSonthebeach:  so i wonder if the guests will know THAT then…!!

Post # 15
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2494 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

@peachacid:  no problem haha. Google says it’s a commune in France. So does wikipediA…. So no idea.

 

Post # 16
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

@takemyhand:  Wikipedia lists “high noon” as “solar noon”

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