(Closed) Please proof-read my hankies!

posted 6 years ago in Weddingbee
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2011 - Bent Creek Winery (Livermore, California); Reception: Family Residence (San Ramon, California)

For the first hankie, you don’t need that first comma you bolded, so it should read: [FI] is a credit to the father you have been and continue to be—thank you.

Second one looks good – you need the comma you bolded.

For the last one, you don’t need the comma in the last sentence, so it should read: Thank you for walking beside me today and every day.

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2011 - Bent Creek Winery (Livermore, California); Reception: Family Residence (San Ramon, California)

No problem. I do a lot of proofreading at my job – I’m kind of like the resident grammar expert, with a specialization in comman placement. 😉 Be sure to show us the final product when you get them back!

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

I agree with parasol’s edits. These sound lovely!

Post # 8
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I second @parasol:s edits.

The hankies wording sounds so sweet 🙂

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