(Closed) please proof read my wording/invitations!

posted 5 years ago in Etiquette
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  • Post # 4
    555 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: September 2013

    @Mint2Bee:  just letting you know twenty  “forth” is spelled twenty  “fourth”.

    also, I’m not sure if I would bother putting ” 6:00 pm “after the reception to follow.

    it really doesn’t need the time there. ” Reception to follow”  is nice

    have fun!

    Post # 5
    491 posts
    Helper bee

    twenty fourt should be twenty-fourth

    I would probably add “In the afternoon” after 5 oclock. i would also get rid of the time for the recpetion. 

    Post # 7
    555 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: September 2013

    @Mint2Bee:  yes, add 5 o’ clock in the afternoon.

    is the reception at the same place as the ceremony? If it is, reception to follow is fine.

    say your ceremony is what 30 minutes? That’s only one half hour till your reception. People aren’t going to leave. They will work their way to the reception.  If the reception is elsewhere, you will néed to write Reception to follow at such and such location. Then your guests will go there.

    Post # 9
    2497 posts
    Buzzing bee

    @Mint2Bee:  I would delete your last name (implied with your parents’ names as hosts) and add “in the afternoon” after the 5 o’clock bit.

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