(Closed) Please proof read this

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

Very pretty!  I have a few suggestions:

– I wouldn’t capitalize anything except for proper nouns (ie take the capitals out for the year and date)

– I would spell out the state name

– I also think it might look a bit better if your names were in a bigger size font to stand out more

 

Other than that I think they look great!  Good job!

Post # 4
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I agree with the above, you want your names to stand out more.. otherwise very cute!

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

I would take out the periods after “parents” and “love” in the first block of text.  I also agree that it might look nice to have the names a little bigger.  Other than that, they look great!!!

Post # 7
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

@MissLacy:  One of my BFF’s is from Frisco! haha 

Post # 8
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

EDIT – I lied, he’s from Cisco. FAIL! Sorry! 🙂

Post # 11
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Newbee
  • Wedding: September 2014

I was going to say that you could’ve kept the caps the way they were in the first proof, having previously designed wedding invites in a professional setting, thats how its usually done. Remember this isnt a school paper lol (caps only on proper nouns etc). I agree about making you and the FI’s names bigger. Everything (dates, times)  should also be spelled out. Also, usually the parents names are spelled out…but its all about space availability on the stationary and preference. Overall, very lovely!!

Post # 12
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Newbee
  • Wedding: September 2014

Also, I know it goes against math logic (if there is such a thing lol), but on invitations the year is usually written “two thousand and thirteen”….but if you prefer it without  the “and”, leave it out! 🙂

Post # 13
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

I agree that on the wedding invitation dates etc are supposed to be capitalized but I like how you changed the font for that in the second proof 

Post # 14
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Busy bee

I like the font in the first pic better, but I like the size change for the names too.

Post # 15
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

Looks great!!  I love both fonts you used in the second version posted.  Go for the printing!!

 

Btw- would you mind sharing what the fonts are?  I am designing our invites too so I’m on the prowl.  Smile

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