(Closed) Please proofread!

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Helper bee

It sounds wonderful. It doesn’t sound like its about your parents–its very clear, on who the bride and groom are, and that it is indeed an invitation to a wedding. IMO–instead of “loved them and encouraged them,” I would have “loved and encouraged them.” Only because it has more fluidity when reading it. Happy planing! 🙂

Post # 4
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135 posts
Blushing bee

@jivet:  At first, I thought you were scolding us on bad grammer and typos Smile .

Then I actually read your post.  Looks good!

Post # 5
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: January 1999

Looks great!  Love the phrasing!

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