(Closed) Please review my programs!

posted 7 years ago in DIY
Post # 4
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1869 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

I think proclamation is misspelled, and in your poem from The Notebook, I think everyday should be two words (every day) because it’s every single day you want to work at it.  Yeah, hard to explain, and I may not be right, but I think it’s two words.

Other than those things I wrote, it looks great!  Don’t you hate having to blur everything?!  I do.

I really like the poem about your loved ones.  It’s really nice.

Edit: I love the Mad Lib too!  What a cute idea!

Post # 5
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550 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2011

@heather5743: You are right. It is a common grammar mistake. Everyday means commonplace or daily. Like, “those are good everyday shoes,” or “I have an everyday class.” Every day means each day.

 

@soon2bhis: I love your Mad Lib. I may have to kindly borrow the idea!!

Post # 7
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1869 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

@brenna1035:  Yay!  I really do know some grammar rules. haha!

Off topic: I love your icon!  I have that picture framed in my house.

Post # 9
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686 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

Is Maid/Matron of Honor,  maid of honor or maid of honour??  

Post # 10
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686 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

I love the song “I have no Freaking Idea”   Haha  That’s a great song!!   : )

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