(Closed) Please help proof my invitation

posted 4 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: February 2014

@jessyrez:  Hi, I’d totally do lower case ‘is’ and lower case ‘two’. Also, what’s the font on that ‘M’ inside the RSVP card, that’s not the same font used throughout. It looks suspiciously Times New Roman to me. That’s all I can help you with for now, I am not wearing my glasses.

 

🙂

Post # 6
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

Do they need to choose a meal?

Post # 7
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: May 2015

This is probably stylistic rather than grammatical, but I would put add punctuation after each line of the date. Not sure if the year should be capitalized:

Saturday, the twelfth of October,

two thousand and thirteen,

at five o’clock in the evening.

Post # 8
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

Is your wedding at a church?  Honour of your presence is used for a religious venue otherwise i believe you are supposed to put we request the pleasure of your company (not sure what the locale os since that is blacked out 🙂

Post # 9
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

@jessyrez:  Hi wedding twin.  I would put “to” instead of “&”.

Post # 10
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Newbee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I know someone suggested making the “T” in “Two Thousand and Thirteen” lower case instead, but according to the following website, the first letter in date lines should always be capitalized.

Invitation Etiquette in 140 Characters or Less

Post # 12
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Wannabee
  • Wedding: October 2013

They look so good!

 

 

 

I too am getting married 10-12-13, my brother is making the invitations and we  have a RSVP date of September 19, is that too late to get an RSVP? My FI says thats ok….but not sure.

 

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