(Closed) Feedback needed- Poem I wrote for Ceremony Reading

posted 6 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

I’m an English teacher, too, and I love that you’re writing a poem for your ceremony! What you have so far is beautiful. I see the simplicity of the ending being part of the message of the poem, and I understand why you’re doing it that way, but I can’t help but want more than this from the poem. I want the quirky details that make your Fiance himself, and what make you guys yourselves as a couple. If you don’t think adding more detail would take away from the simplicity of the message (which is lovely), I’d add more.

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2015

Mnmnmn… 

Post # 5
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: December 2012

As someone that writes poetry, and loves free form, I really loves this.

It’s very personal and a nice touch for your special day, as well as a nod to your profession.

Post # 6
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2009

I personally love when couples personalize their ceremony, through personalized vows, poems, songs, etc.

I think it is a great poem. Simplistic, but meaningful! Are you going to be doing the reading yourself, or will someone else? 

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