(Closed) Pole dance bachelorette party – wording help

posted 8 years ago in Bridesmaids
Post # 3
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

@jazzcitla:

I’m just going to fix some of the punctuation and stuff for you a bit. Sounds like fun!

While xxxxx’s Prince Charming is away, we are taking her out to play!

We’re going out for a hot, sexy, live & wild pole dance class, hosted by me. Please bring your most sexy shoes and outfit… if you dare!

Next we will be off to Axis Radios! We’ll all be responsible for our own drinks and entrance fee.

Let’s all help xxxxxx enjoy her last night as a bachelorette by dancing and partying the night away! If you would like to chip in for the pole dance classes, please let me know! πŸ™‚ 

Peace & Love πŸ™‚

Post # 4
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

I agree that sounds like fun!

Wait, it’s YOUR bachelorette? I’d always assume all the girls pay for themselves and the bride to be’s bachelorette outing fee?

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

Oh man, that is an AWESOME bachelorette party idea!  (If you’re keeping track, yes, I’m one of those anti-strip-club people, but stripping for fun and for one’s SO sounds AWESOME!)  Unfortunately, my friends wouldn’t go for it.  

Dang it.  Now I want pole-dance classes (I already have a book for it, but not a pole.)  Maybe while Hubby is deployed, and then I can install a pole in our bedroom after we buy a house.

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

@jazzcitla: Are you the “me” who is hosting?

Post # 9
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: February 2011

@Gerbera: Agreed. That’s how it was at mine. I wasn’t allowed to pay for anything, and they would have been livid if I had tried to get in on the planning.

Post # 11
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

@jazzcitla: Ok, then – I’d suggest the wording I posted above. Happy to help – have fun!

Post # 12
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

@jazzcitla:

ooohhhhhh ok. That makes more sense now.

So if you are only asking guests to pay $x who’s paying for the balance? Your bridal party?

Now, I don’t know your circle of friends but I think it’s completely OK to ask your friends to pay for their own entrance fee. It’s only $35. It’s not like you are asking them to pay for a expensive weekend trip away.

But that’s just my opinion. You and your bridal party will know what works best within your group of friends. πŸ™‚

Post # 14
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

@jazzcitla:

That’s really awesome of your bridal party! πŸ™‚

I would say half then or $18 (or $20) to make it even. πŸ™‚

Post # 15
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: February 2011

@jazzcitla: I would avoid mentioning actual dollar amounts on the invitation. Beluga’s wording is good, and I would just supplement that by having your Maid/Matron of Honor, as the host, let everyone know by word of mouth what kind of costs they can expect to pay.

Post # 16
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

how bout a cute poem and then bullet point the info??

While xxxxx’s Prince Charming is away,

we are taking her out to play!

The night’s to start with a hot, wild, and sexy

pole dancing class that’s sure to be spicy!!

We’ll end at Axis Radios for drinks and dancing

a fun filled night so worth attending!!!

So come join the fun with our bachelorette

and make this a party she’ll never forget!!

Host: XXX 

Where:  Pole dancing class then Axis Radios

Cover: $xx for the class/party  plus you are responsbile for your own cover and drinks at Axis Radios

Attire: sexy shoes and outfit….if you dare!!

RSVP:  xxxxxx

Peace & Love πŸ™‚

 

or something like that…

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