Post # 1
Hi ladies! I got so much great help last time I posted that I thought I would try it again! I have been working on designing my DIY invites for a couple months now and I am going crazy with all the ideas floating around in my head – I dont even know what I like anymore! Can you tell me which of the invites below you like best? Also, do you have any suggestions on improving one or both of these? Thanks ladies!
I have also posted below the pocket fold I am using (a mock-up I made), which may help you decide your fave!
Post # 3
The first one, but you should to add your last names to it.
Post # 4
Voted 2 but I think that it would be improved by knocking down the size of the text under your names to match the size of the “together with their families”. I just really want to see more negative space between the names and the body text, and the larger font size doesn’t make sense to me.
Post # 5
boo, someone said they all suck! Tears! Oh, i gave people the option, right?
GreenDream, does this look any better? (dont mind the black line at the top, I took a screen shot to reduce the file size)
Post # 6
Yeah, I think so. Maybe shift the body text down a little bit? Celebration is hugging the tail of the ‘y’. I do like how it extends the whole way across the page at it’s widest point in the ver of 2 in your OP. That one might be a better choice.
Post # 7
I agree with @GreenDream I definitely like the 2nd one better out of the original 2, & the offset text to the right is great! I like that much better than it being centered like the 1st one.
Maybe if you make the “Together with their families” a little bigger and the info text a little smaller, so that it still almost reaches across the page like the 1st one, but looks more uniform like the 2nd.
Post # 8
I like the second one because the first I see as very typical, and the second is a little different and looks very sharp!
Post # 9
DATE TWIN!!! I love Number 2!!!