(Closed) Proof my invite please.. Color suggestions would be appreciated as well.

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Hostess
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2011

@ekizuna:  I think it’s a beautiful invitation! I’m a little concerned about the coloring on the wording – i’m not sure if it’s my computer screen, but I do feel like I’m squinting to read things. I wish the coloring could just be a little darker.  What would the invite look like with a more simple text as you suggested?

I think your wording is okay, but Im definitely not a pro at stuff like that. Hopefully you get some good advice! 😀

Post # 4
Member
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2013 - The Down Town Club, Philadelphia

This is a beautiful design! But I agree with PP, the text should be darker – brown, perhaps? Your names could stay in color, but the actual info should be easier to read.

Also, you might consider a serif font for the information. Again, making it easier to read.

As for the wording, I would make it all third person… I would suggest it reading as such:

“You are invited to celebrate the beginning of a new life together as Bride Name and Groom Name are united as husband and wife” 

 

Post # 5
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5883 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: October 2010

What some people do is put the text in simplier font, then your names in scripty font. 

Post # 6
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

@Reeniero:  I agree that third person wording would read better.

I also agree with @KoiKove. I think you could stand to leave your names in the scripted font, and that a sans serif font would look better for the rest of the invitation.

Post # 8
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I love the art nouveau feeling!

As for the invitation itself, it is easier to read with the sans serif font. However, I still find it difficult to read the reception information at the end – the light orange makes me squint more than any of the other colours. Could you make it darker or perhaps change it to a darker green?

As for the wording, third person does look a lot better!

Post # 10
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Bumble bee

I think I would make the text that nice blue color in the invite. It would be easiest to read. Also, the pink would look nice. I think the text should be one color. 

Post # 12
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2014

I think the invitation is beautiful, but I don’t like that the words are all different colors.  I would pick one color or possibly put just your names in another color.  I would stick with black, TBH.  I think it’s classy that way. 

Post # 13
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2023 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: May 2013

Beautiful!!! 

Post # 14
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

Love the ombre version personally, your names stand out, it flows well and it’s easy to read!

Post # 15
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013 - Creek club at ion, SC

I like it in all blue.I agree you should stick with a colour.

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