MemberHi,
Can you please check my menu below of any errors before I print them. I am also wondering if for my second entree “french Served” needs to be said.
Also is it ok to have the salad served with the second entree or should I change it?
MemberSalads are usually first course. . . and not sure what purpose “french served” serves on the menu.
MemberI’m assuming people get beef or chicken. it reads as if they get both. I would just say entree and then describe the beef put “or” the describe the chicken.
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MemberI had to look up what “french served” means — and I’m still not sure. I don’t know if you need to have it on the menu anyway.
I don’t know if the final menu will be larger, but I find that font really difficult to read at the size it’s at.
Member1. When I read this I thought “what is blush sauce?” and then “what is french served?” I could guess the former, but had to look up the latter.
2. They’re serving the chicken after the beef? That’s kinda odd in my experience.
3. It’s not entree and second entree; It’s second course and third course
4. I think the typefaces should be switched around. Use the script (which is hard to read) for the titles and the serif for the food.
MemberI find it really difficult to read.
French served (family style?) can probably be removed.
If it were me, I would say ‘First Plate’, ‘Second Plate’, and ‘Entree’. Not sure about ‘Second Entree’?
@geekspice: +1 (but the OCD in me wants to mention that it’s a ‘sans-serif’ font)
MemberMemberAlso I think the part that reads “coffee, tea, espresso” is weird, since espresso is coffee.
Member@bebero: I don’t agree with that. If it was just “coffee & tea” then I wouldn’t know that I had the option to order an espresso. I would think that it was just percolated coffee and tea.
MemberThanks everyone, I made some changes based on what you said, mind the fact its not centred right now.
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