(Closed) Proof Read my Etsy Invitations please!!! Thanks bees!

posted 4 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

Should the f in favor be capitalized? Otherwise I think they look great!

Post # 4
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: May 2014

@Barbiestylez:  I’m using the same invitation LOL, I think I saw this when you orginally posted! I really need to start our process! Everything looks great!

Post # 5
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2012

I agree I don’t think the F in favor should be capitalized.

My only other complaint would be the words “regret to” on the RSVP blend together a bit because of the decorative “t”s. It was hard for me to read at first, but that might just be my monitor too.

Post # 6
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2017 - Baton Rouge, LA

seriously gorgeous invites! Would you want to put on the RSVP card how many seats you have reserved in the guests honor? I’ve seen a ton of trainwrecks on the bee where, even if you specifically address the invite to certain people, they write in a number of more people than you planned for. Might be something to consider adding

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

Honour is normally spelled the British way, in this situation, even in the US.  There should be commas after Presence, Hearts, and Lives.

Post # 8
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2014

@Barbiestylez:  I love them! Can I ask what vendor you used / how much you are paying? Also… I am a July bride… do I need to be doing my invitations now?!?!?!

Post # 10
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@Barbiestylez:  omg these are gorgeous. Did you really pay $7 each? The envelopes are to DIE.

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@Barbiestylez:  Aw, boo. Yeah I WISH. Our guest list will probably be approaching 200, and probably 100+ invites.

Post # 13
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

@Barbiestylez:  shouldn’t it be Columbus, OH with a comma? 

Post # 15
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

I agree the F in favor shouldn’t be capitalized. I also think the invitation shouldn’t say “SATURDAY, JUNE SEVENTH”, it should instead read “SATURDAY, THE SEVENTH OF JUNE”. 

ETA – also, the F in follow (reception to follow) shouldn’t be capitalized

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