(Closed) Proofread my invitation, please?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

  • take out “on” before the date
  • take out “at” before the time

Post # 6
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

I think they look very nice!! 

Is it ‘ok’ to just say “together with their parents” instead of naming both sets of parents specifically on the invite? I’m doing a Vistaprint invitation also and it messes with the formatting to try to put both sets of parents’ names on there. I like the way yours flows by just using “Together with their parents.”

Is that a financial etiquette question? We are each paying a third (me and Fiance, my parents, his parents) of the wedding.

 

Post # 7
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2010

What is the St James meeting house?  Typically “honor of your presence” is reserved for getting married in a place of worship, and “pleasure of your company” is for non-church venues.

Post # 9
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2010

@futuremrsndl:  The names that go on your invites are the hosts (ie, people that are paying for) the event.

Post # 10
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

@SapphireSun:  I assumed it was a house of worship, but this is a good question.

OP, I’d probably not capitalize two and I would also remove “and” in there, but there is not a hard adn fast rule on that one.

Post # 12
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

@futuremrsndl:  I think you’re right about who you would put on the invite – you could always put a little extra ‘blurb’ in your program about your late fathers if you wanted.

Are the names going to mess with the format of your invite? 

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