(Closed) Proofread my thank you note?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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696 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

Looks good to me 🙂

I would maybe say “It is perfect as we are in the process of redecorating our bathroom and your generous gift will definitely help out!”

but that is really just a matter of preference and it is good either way.

Post # 5
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: December 2012

 Looks great !!

I agree with @MapleCreekBride: add the “and your generous gift will definitely help out”

PS… I assume that this gift came in POST WEDDING and not before, otherwise, you probably have to go back to the Drawing Board and give a more general statement in regards to the house you’ll both be occupying once you are married.

 

 

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