(Closed) PROOFREAD my wording, please!

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Newbee
  • Wedding: August 2011

Looks good to me!

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: January 2011

I think it looks good, the only thing I question is the need for number of seats in your honor AND number attending both being on the response card. I think one or the other would be just fine… but that’s up to you 🙂

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: January 2011

And to answer your question about timing on the response cards, one month before is a good timeline. That way you can get them back in time to get your numbers into the caterer for the reception, and have your numbers in case you have any last minute details to take care of.

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2011 - Franciscan Gardens

@Ginger87: I plan on doing this too~ That way, when I sent the invitation to Mr & Mrs FiveKids they know that only the Mr and Mrs are invited and not their 5 kids. So then if I’ve written “I’ve reserved 2 seats in your honor” and then they write “7 attending” I can call them and explain. 🙂

 

Post # 7
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2011 - Franciscan Gardens

@heatherxnicole: Looks great! The only thing that you might consider changing is that grammatically when the year is written out there isn’t supposed to be an “and” So, it should read “Two Thousand Eleven”  It’s one of those things that many people don’t know or notice though.

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