(Closed) rsvp poem

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: January 2018

What about: Come for the Love, Stay for the dancing and celebration

Post # 5
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

We hope you can come celebrate and dance the night away so please kindly reply by the 15th of may.

Post # 6
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

What about this?

 

If you want to dance the night away

And help celebrate our wedding day

kindly reply by the 15th of May

Post # 7
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: February 2012

@missmature: Personally I would tighten it up a bit so the syllables are more even.

“Come for the love and dance the night away

But please kindly reply by the 15th of May”

Post # 8
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

I really like that!

Post # 10
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Busy bee

Yay and Nay rhyme with May. LOL A little too casual but it may work

Post # 11
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Bee Keeper

@missmature: My friends Yes option was “Wouldn’t miss it for the world.” It was so cute. I think the No option was “Will be there in spirit only.”

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