Post # 1
working on wording for my rsvp card
This is what I want –but when I did the mock up it didnt sound right
Come for the love, celebrate and dance the night away
But please kindly reply by the 15th of May
Post # 3
need to get printed tomorrow! help
Post # 4
What about: Come for the Love, Stay for the dancing and celebration
Post # 5
We hope you can come celebrate and dance the night away so please kindly reply by the 15th of may.
Post # 6
What about this?
If you want to dance the night away
And help celebrate our wedding day
kindly reply by the 15th of May
Post # 7
@missmature: Personally I would tighten it up a bit so the syllables are more even.
“Come for the love and dance the night away
But please kindly reply by the 15th of May”
Post # 9
I think I needed help “tightening it up” Thanks! We wanted to say something fun and informal. Any suggestions for he repies
We have; “Cant wait to be there” and “Sorry will miss it” Anything else sound more fun and unique???
Post # 10
Yay and Nay rhyme with May. LOL A little too casual but it may work
Post # 11
My friends Yes option was “Wouldn’t miss it for the world.” It was so cute. I think the No option was “Will be there in spirit only.”