(Closed) Save The Date draft – Opinions please!!

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

(accidental double post — sorry)

Post # 4
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

@centralcoastbride: i’d change the font style or color of the blue script… with both, it’s a little hard to see… maybe just making them bigger would be enough? also, is there a typo? it almost looks like “greatings” instead of “greetings.” otherwise, i think it’s really great! nice job!!!

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

I love the fonts.  I would make “please save the date” a little larger.  Also, you misspelled “greEtings.” But it looks great.  Really nice pic!

Post # 6
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

I’m also having trouble reading the blue font–also is Greetings spelled wrong or is it just the way the font appears? Other than that, it is gorgeous!

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee

@centralcoastbride: Its a wonderful pic but I can’t read the blue writing. It needs to be a bit more clear.

Post # 9
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

@centralcoastbride: It looks good.  If you could make the font thicker/bolder, that might help.  Cute picture!  I love The Golden State font!

Post # 10
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2014 - Ontario, Canada ♥ EDD- April 2016

I love the fonts (: I do think the blue is a bit hard to read though. I’d be really happy if I got one of these in the mail, good job!

Post # 11
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

Yah, the blue font is definitely too hard to read.  I would actually even change the color to a green or something, it might flow a little better. 

Post # 13
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: May 2009

From a graphic design standpoint, you could improve the STD by determining what you want to be your dominant element and work from there.  Right now, you’re featuring the grassy hillside and “The Golden State.”  It seems to me that you should be focusing on the image of yourselves and the save the date message.   I would recommend changing both fonts, too, as the typography for the Golden State is too bold, and the other text is too difficult to read.  (I see that PPs already pointed out the misspelling.)

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