(Closed) Shower invite wording – Please HELP!

posted 8 years ago in Parties
Post # 3
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Bee Keeper

I think what you have sounds very cute!  One suggestion, you may want to add the word “small” in front of line three.  Because people will think “Oh, she can carry a hand blender.”  And if five people think that, then you’ll need a spare suitcase! 

It may also be a good idea to nest your suitcase inside of a larger one on your way to Philly so that you’ll have a suitcase to put your gifts in on the way back.

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: March 2010 - Ritz-Carlton, Half Moon Bay

i think that’s pretty cute and second mightysapphire’s suggestion.

Post # 5
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2010

I think that sounds really cute. People are going to bring gifts to a wedding shower, so it’s better off that you put something in there about shipping them to your home.

Post # 6
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Wannabee
  • Wedding: July 2010

Oh, wow, I was having the SAME conversation with my Future Mother-In-Law this past weekend.  I live in Chicago, and she’s hosting a shower for me in Philadelphia.  Ultimately, I chickened out and washed my hands of it and told her to put whatever she wanted on the invites.  I can’t imagine she came up with something as tasteful and adorable as your poem.  I think it’s great.  I agree with MightySapphire, however, that you might want to add the word “small” to the 3rd line. 

Post # 7
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

So cute!  I think that is great and adding “small” will get the message across loud and clear.

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