(Closed) some invitation help PLEASE!

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
Member
16 posts
Newbee
  • Wedding: April 2013

The opening line is very pretty!

 

Just a few minor suggestions:

Write “September 1st” or “the first of September”

Write “four o’clock” since the pm isn’t needed you’re not getting married at 4am. 🙂

 

Great job!

Post # 6
Member
275 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: January 2012

I do love the opening line and LOVE the Wynn chapel. 

The request may sound more formal worded:

Mr. Phillip and Veronica Gordon request the honor of your
presence at the marriage of their daughter.

I also agree with the date verbiage, it sounds more formal written out.


 

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