(Closed) STD mockup… Opinions please!

posted 7 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: November 2011

I love this idea!! Very cute. Cant wait to see more.

Post # 4
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

i like it! with Year 7 being an e-pic, it’ll be great!

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

Great start!

My critique would be that the purples don’t seem to be the same shade. In the first photo, it’s more of a pretty plum. In the second, it’s a brighter grape color. I realize it could totally be my computer, but you might want to take a closer look.

Also, the capitalization seems a little inconsisent. Should “Save” and “Date” (at the top) really be capitalized? Finally, the copy says you are getting married “on” year seven. Do you mean “in year seven”? Or are you actually getting married on your 7th anniversary–if so, cool!

I hope these don’t seem like picky critiques! I just want them to be perfect for you. Good luck! ๐Ÿ™‚

 

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

Oh sorry, I guess I didn’t read closely! My bad! You totally explained the 7 year thing! I guess I might be a little concerned that the guests might think it’s a typo, too.

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