(Closed) STD Wording – Helpppppp!!

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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86 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

Since it reads like a mini poem, I’d use a comma. I wouldn’t use the dash. And yes, lower case on the ‘h’.

We’re getting married and the date is set,

here is a magnet so you won’t forget!

Post # 4
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132 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I do think the dash is a little weird, but I do a lot of proofreading in my job so I’m pretty sensitive to it. Why not have the first line end in a period?

The wording is really cute.

Post # 6
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86 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

@Maurasaurus:  Definitely! I’d keep the exclamation mark for sure. It’s more fun + exciting that way 🙂

Post # 7
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6211 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2013 - The Liberty House

I would use a comma. But I would probably also skip the insert because people will know what it’s for, unless there is any other info on it. They will know it is a magnet by looking at it and I’m assuming it says save the date somewhere on it?

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