(Closed) STDs What do you think?

posted 9 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

The website address is really hard to read, I would tweak that if I were you. Other then that, very cute!

Post # 5
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Helper bee

I agree with lovespearls, they are very cute though! Love the black and white. Laughing

Post # 6
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: March 2010 - Calamigos Ranch

Definitely clear up the website. I even had mine clear and large, and people still didn’t realize we had one. 😉

Personally I like pictures of the couple on the Save-The-Date Cards, but I’m not sure where you’d fit it here, so I think it’s fine to leave it off. Cute design!

Post # 7
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

Wow, I’m way impressed!  What about adding the city you are getting married for out-of-town guests?  Just another thought. 

Post # 10
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

Looks great now!!

Post # 11
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2009

They look great! I would unbold the website or make it a thinner font thinner.

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2010 - Heron Hill Winery

I think the newer one looks great…my only suggestion would be to try and get better resolution on the script font…it appears a little pixelated

Post # 13
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

Looks great! I want to do those but with a pic of my Fiance and I. Could you tell me how you did this please? Thanks! Cool

Post # 14
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2009

You have done so well already!! I really like what you have going, I have some minor tweaks that will push this a little to make it even better.

The thin times new roman font on the website & formal invite to follow line looks very boring when compared to the pretty lines you have going on the other fonts.

-Uncaps the "Formal invitation to follow." line and italicize it.

-I would also do this to your website, bold it as well and take off the word "website" put a www. in front of it and they will know what it is.

-Make the red line a little wider because the black will swallow the red when you print it and you will hardly be able to see it.

-I would also bring your flourishes all the way to the edge of the card and it will look a lot more professional.

 

I made a mock up because I’m a visual person and thought I’d show you what I was talking about. I took a screen shot of your file off the web so it’s a little blurry/low res.

 

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Post # 15
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Helper bee

It looks great but she mentioned that there’s extra space because that will get cut off when printed.

I think the website should not be italicized. Other than that I love it!

Post # 16
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: July 2010

Looks fantastic!  How about make the website address red so it stands out too?  Although I do like just having the “the” red…… Nice job!

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