(Closed) Thoughts on my MOH speech please!

posted 5 years ago in Emotional
  • poll: Is it perfect?
    Not yet but almost : (9 votes)
    50 %
    No where never : (2 votes)
    11 %
    Perfect as is : (7 votes)
    39 %
  • Post # 3
    230 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: June 2015

    I think it would be sweet to add a funny or favorite memory of yourself and the bride! It’s great though!

    Post # 6
    1094 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: August 2013

    @eecuadrado:  Love everything!!! It’s very sweet…

    There’s something about this line that caughter me when reading it tho…:

    “the pure silence screamed they were meant to me. “

    I’m assuming you meant “to be”, but the word screamed is a little.. something. Scary? 

    Not sure what else you could use…. Spoke? Made it clear to everyone there? The pure silence in that moment showed me that they were meant to be? 

    Post # 8
    11752 posts
    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: November 1999

    I think it’s prefect – short, very sweet and to the point. Sometimes, less is more!

    Post # 9
    569 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: November 2013

    Overll I think it’s very sweet!  This might just be me being nit-picky about words, but I would maybe change “rant” to something else (the line “B would rant about how perfect J was”), because to me “rant” has negative connotations.

    Post # 13
    322 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: October 2014 - Restaurant

    I think it’s great.  I like how you said she was “sassy” lol.  I might steal that.  I have to do a Maid/Matron of Honor speech soon too and I’m SO NERVOUS. 

    Post # 16
    437 posts
    Helper bee

    @eecuadrado:  I think it’s absoutely perfect, it made me tear up! 

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