(Closed) Thoughts on this wording for the invitations?

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
3039 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I think it looks good for a more casual affair. I would only change the order of the date – to “Saturday, the 28th of September”. Just one more thing, do you plan to add anything about a reception? Just a simple “reception to follow” might be a good addition.

Post # 4
1465 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2014

@MsSunny:  I think it’s wonderful. I think an invitation should say what it means. For instance, I’m forgoing the whole “honor of your presence” thing. I don’t want an audience- I want family friends and love, dancing the night away and having a blast! So if your invitation says what you want, DO IT! I love your invitation wording!

Post # 5
750 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2001

I like yours. Ours is similar:

“Together with our parents,


Name 1 & Name 2


invite you to share our joy as we 

celebrate our union with christ

Saturday 5th of October at Four Thirty

Wedding Location



Dinner, Drinks and Dancing will follow”

I like your wording too. 

Post # 6
7 posts
  • Wedding: July 2013

Some parents may be offended if you don’t actually include their names, especially if they are contributing financially to the wedding!

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