(Closed) vows

posted 7 years ago in Emotional
Post # 3
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

Welcome to the Hive!

I would go ahead and post them.

Post # 4
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Busy Beekeeper

ya, no harm in posting them here – its annonymous.

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

Either post them or you can Personal message them. i would love to hear them! I’m huge into poems, and literature as well.

Post # 7
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Busy Beekeeper

i think i like the first version better. i like the symmetry of starting several sentences with “i promise”.  the only thing i would suggest changing in it is this part: 

Along with these promises, I will love you till death do us part and in sickness and health.

 because it sounds cliche and since you are writing your own vows, i think it would be nicer to replace this sentence with something of the same meaning, but your own words.  thats just my 2 cents!  good job!

Post # 8
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I like version 1 best! Both versions sound great though!

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