(Closed) Vows, can I get some feedback?

posted 7 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

I think the second line from the bottom sounds a lot more casual than the rest of the block of text, that’s the only thing that stands out to me.  It sounds nice and I like the way you worded the MA/legal aspect =)

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

what about if your officiant says the thing about you being legally wed?

like: while they made their legal vows in mass. today they speak the vows of their hearts.

but ya know, prettier sounding. lol.

Post # 6
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

*bump* for more bees to see!!

Post # 7
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

Love your vows!  They are heartfelt and beautiful.  I’m struggling with my own at the moment, so I’m totally jealous of how eloquent yours are.  I also think it might be nice to have your officiant mention the part about the legal vows…

Post # 8
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Bee Keeper

Your vows gave me chills. Beautiful.

Post # 9
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: February 2014

I really like the second line from the bottom- its very personal even though it may not sound like the best poetry- you are saying what you mean!!

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