(Closed) Vows…Final Revision, thoughts?

posted 8 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: March 2010

Those are great vows!  I seriously love them.  I think you have a typo in the first line “now” instead of “not” but otherwise fabulous.

Post # 4
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

Perfect!  I got a little teary reading them.

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: November 2010

very nice! we haven’t worked on our vows yet (got 8 months) but i def will be including some humor.

Post # 6
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Bumble bee

I think the joke in the beginning is funny and a good ice breaker. My favorite vow is the “point of strength”.

Have you said them outloud and pretended like you are at the ceremony? I wouldn’t do the joke at the end because I think it takes away from the serious vows, which are beautiful. But that’s just my opinion. If it is your personality to joke all the time, then you should go for it.

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: December 2010

lovely—i love personal vows.  Very touching.

Post # 8
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

aww..those are beautiful!

@ Candy_Nee- me too!

Post # 9
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

Awww…very nice!

As a self-professed grammar nerd, there’s one small change I would make.

I would change, “I promise to make our family a home, and to make our life every bit the fairytale you’ve given me.”

to

“I promise to make a home for our family…”

Otherwise it sounds like you literally want to turn your family into a home…if you know what I mean 🙂

These sound great though and it’s nice that you’ve been able to make them so personal. All the best!

Post # 11
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

Awww beautiful!!!!!

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