(Closed) What do y'all think of my invite suite? (design, font, wording…) Thanks!

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
16213 posts
Honey Beekeeper

Hey there and welcome to Weddingbee! Your invite suite looks great. I especially love the invitation itself and the RSVP. I love the yellow on grey!

Post # 4
1342 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: December 2012

@cpierson:  Looks great!!  Congrats!!!

Post # 5
9801 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper

Just a couple of comments:

FYI, most brides choose the English spelling “honour” to go on a wedding invitation although both “honor” and “honour”  are correct.  

I would spell out the time of the reception “at six o’clock”  just as you did for the ceremony time.  

I’m not a big fan of fill in the blank type RSVP cards, but I know some people consider them to be a necessary evil!   

Otherwise, congratulations and best wishes on the upcoming wedding!  

Post # 6
3572 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

They look nice.  I would remove the dash as well as the word “and”  in “two-thousand and fourteen”

Post # 7
11234 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013

That shade of yellow is not doing it for me at all. It’s WAY too bright. IMO, it would look much better, with that blue and grey, in white.

Post # 8
9550 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013

Beautiful!!! I’m not a huge fan of the bottom font on the invitation. The rest of the invitation is so graphic and artsy and that font seems a bit utilitarian. But I love the color and design of everything!

Post # 9
8394 posts
Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2012


I’d spell out 22nd since you did for everything else

2014 should be two thousand fourteen

I’d spell out 6 o’clock, again since you did elsewhere

Personally I find the leading on the actual invite a bit tight, but that’s my personal preference.

Post # 11
1301 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2015

There’s a bit of eye-trickery going on with the blue color.  I’m sure that they’re all actually the same color blue, but because they’re on different backgrounds people’s eyes will see them as different colors.  On your ceremony invitation, I think you need to make the font darker and on on the reception invitation I think it needs to be lighter.

If you’re doing the reception name and address in all caps, I would do the church name and address in all caps, as well.  I personally don’t like including the hotel pricing on the invitation, but that’s just my preference.

Overall I think they look great!  Love your color scheme!

Post # 12
9801 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper

@MrsTVLover:  +1

Also agree with TGold about not including price information on the invitations and on keeping the font consistent on the ceremony and reception cards. 

Post # 15
1018 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

@Westwood:  +1 bingo

and as Vorpalette said– they yellow is too bright for me (although it could be computer issues and not the way you intend for it to print)

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