(Closed) What do you Bees think of our invitation suite?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

These are so cute, I love your RSVP cards. Did you design them yourselves?

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

These are super! I absoultely adore your response card

Post # 6
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: November 2011

So cute!!

Post # 7
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

Very cute! Definitely appropriate for a summer garden wedding.

Post # 8
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2012

@random7890:  They’re sure adorbs!!

Post # 9
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: April 2011

These are GREAT!!! I love how fun & quirky they are, but still SO wedding!

Post # 11
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: May 2009

The design is adorable! Have you already had them printed? (If not, I was going to make a few suggested edits.)

Post # 13
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: May 2009

@random7890:  I was just going to suggest the following potential edits:

* On the invitation, I would remove “and” from the year, so that it reads “TWO THOUSAND THIRTEEN”

* On the response card, I would suggest changing the format of the date so it’s consistent with the format of the date on the invitation, so that it reads: “TWENTIETH OF APRIL” 

(Or, if you want the date to be more casual on the reply card, just remove the “th” from the date in its current format, so that it reads “APRIL 20”)

* The current wording on the reply card regarding your guests and hunger is a bit awkward and unclear. I’m not completely sure of what you’re trying to say, but, based on what I THINK you want to say, I would suggest changing the wording to read: “If you are coming, please come hungry!” or something along those lines.

I’m presuming that, what appears to be some gaps/spacing issues in certain locations in the text, is actually blank space where you intentionally “erased” personal or specific information for privacy reasons.

The design really is adorable!

 

Post # 15
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

I LOVE these! So cute and fun!

Post # 16
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

@random7890:  Now that you mention it, “please” three times does seem overly polite… maybe remove one of these? Maybe:

If you are coming, you should come hungry!

Please indicate each guest’s entree of choice below.

OR if that’s too informal, maybe:

If you are coming, please come hungry!

Indicate each guest’s entree of choice below.

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