(Closed) What do you think..?

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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1161 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: March 2011

They are beautiful.  As you mentioned, they are really hard to read on the screen.  I’d have someone older take a look at them in real life to make sure that older eyes can read them clearly.

 

I also wonder if a less ornate script might look a little better with the ornate paper….maybe  not, but if you had a plainer script it might really make the paper pop more.

Post # 4
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5784 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2011

“on or before” seems wordy to me, I’d just replace it with “by”. The font is really pretty but kinda hard to read, you may want to try using two fonts (you say its easier to read in person so I could be wrong).

Post # 5
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4137 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

can you wash out the background a little more, or is that actually the paper? maybe you can bold the font?

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