(Closed) What do you think about this ceremony wording??

posted 9 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 4
6 posts

Beautiful! Personally, I’d probably go with “chosen these rings as a symbol” rather than “chosen rings as OUTWARD symbols”, but that’s the only teeny tiny thing that I would change for my own! Your wording is lovely!

Post # 5
9 posts

Just beautiful!  Good luck on your big day. 🙂

Post # 6
374 posts
Helper bee

Did you check with your officiant?  I’m confused.  who is  marrying you and why did you have to write your own service?  Where do you live?

Post # 8
34 posts
  • Wedding: November 2009

i’ve been writing and editing my own too! we’re not religious at all and we’re having a friend marry us next month. i don’t want anything religious or anything that could be percieved as sexist so it’s been really tough to think about how to structure the ceremony. because we love to read and we love music we’ve incorporated readings and music into it to flesh it out a bit.

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