(Closed) What do you think of our invites?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

Very pretty but you should remove all of your personal info.

Post # 4
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

Pretty! 

Post # 6
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Bumble Beekeeper

I like them!

Post # 7
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

Love them! They look great! 

Post # 8
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

They look great, but I would more “to” down on the line with “join.” You don’t want to break up phrases like that.

Post # 9
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2012

Looks great, I love it.

Post # 10
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2011 - Ravenswood Billboard Factory

These are beautiful invites!  My only thought is removing the comma after dinner since it looks off next to the ampersand.

Post # 11
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Bumble bee

I love them, simple and classy. Good job!

Post # 12
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

@bacon:  I see keep the comma. I’m a huge supporter of the Oxford comma.

Here’s why: 

Also, I didn’t see it before, but you should remove the hypen in “One-block’s walk.”

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