(Closed) What do you think of this save the date card?

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2010

I don’t think it’s too little kiddish… but the phrase “delighted to introduce” kind of makes me think of a birth announcement…

Post # 4
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 2010

love it!

Post # 5
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2010

I love the silouhettes 🙂 they are pretty! is your wedding color that pink?

Post # 6
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Buzzing bee

I think it’s cute, but I’d probably say “delighted to reveal” instead of introduce.

Post # 8
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: December 2017

These are cute!  I agree that “introduce” sounds a little like a baby annoucement.  Could you chance it to “annouce” or “reveal”?

Post # 9
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: April 2010 - Signature Events

Very cute—pink and white stripes always make me happy. : )

Post # 10
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Bumble bee

very cute!!!

although, I do agree with the first post, “delighted to introduce”.

Post # 11
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2011

I love them too. Very simple, yet elegant at the same time.

Post # 12
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

SOO cute! I would definitely change the “introduce”…it does sound a bit like a birth announcement. 🙂

Also, I would maybe think about having your last names on it somewhere (even if its just on the back or something).

It’s lovely!!

Post # 13
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

I like it!  You might also want to add the location where the wedding will take place for people who might have to travel.

Post # 14
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: March 1996

What about “delighted to announce?” I love the silhouettes.

Post # 15
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

I like the invite. I think you need to put the city in there… Because it gives good idea for Out of Town guests were they need to travel and maybe they can start saving??

 

Post # 16
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

ummm im also wondering.. on there is has your date as being 2012 but on your profile here on wb.. its 2010 is it a typo? or have you rearranged your date?

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